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Are you thinking of selling your home…. are you overwhelmed? Is the stress and worry keeping you up at night?
If you are thinking of buying a home……Is it difficult to locate a trustworthy realtor?
Do you just want to eliminate the pain and frustrations of your real estate transaction?
If you can answer yes to any of these questions, then I can help you!
Hi…. I am Dan Finn and have been a realtor for over 20 years.
I tell people all the time that it’s not just about the sale – it’s about people and listening to their goals, wants, needs and desires. And then meeting those expectations.
Whether this is your 1<sup>st</sup> time in the real estate market or you are a seasoned veteran… I have the skills to help you realize your goals in a friendly, professional and efficient manner.
So message me or give me a call right now at 727-667-0330.
Thanks.
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Hey @pat-finn, really great start on your infomercial!
I want the questions you ask to be SHORT and sweet 3 questions.
Your Q1 was 2 questions in 1.
Instead you could do:
“Is the idea of sell your home in the shortest amount of time giving you added stress that is keeping you up at night?”
^ see how I combined them? I want you to do that with questions that have 2 in 1 questions.
Regardless, make them powerful and short.
Next, you don’t actually provide information on how you’re going to help them. I want you to write 3-5 sentences on how you serve your clients. Why should they work with you??
Lastly, call to action.
Yours is good but this is better –>
If you’re ready to _______ then give me a call TODAY at ______ or message me here on LI to see if we’re a good fit!
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