Hi @tami-ramzinski, thank you for your submission! I am in the process of reviewing this and will provide feedback soon 🙂

Hi @tami-ramzinski, nice work taking action on your profile! Below are my comments for revision:

Your profile photo is lovely but i’d like you to have a more professional photo of you smiling straight on without it showing your arms crossed. If you don’t have another option, you can send it to Lindsey, our graphic designer, and have her zoom in and add a white background to make it more professional.

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Licensed Realtor”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important. Remember, this is not a resume. This is a sales letter so you want to make the focus on THEM and less on you.

You want to lead them through your sales letter sharing WHAT you do, WHO you work with, WHY they should work with you, and HOW you help your clients. You need a lot more written in this area.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂 Connect with at least 20+ people a day on LinkedIn*