Hi @chris-nessier-2-2! Wonderful to have you in the program with us. Below are my comments on your LinkedIn profile:

GREAT work on your profile photo and banner image! These both look very professional and clean.

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is on the right path  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

I like how you’re starting off your sales letter talking about your experience but you want to talk in 1st or 2nd person to really connect with your reader.

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Also, you HAVE good content, it just needs to be better organized. Less about you – MORE about your perfect client. Remember, this is not a resume. This is a way to tell your perfect client (reader) WHO you work with, WHY they should work with you, HOW you help, and WHAT you do.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program!

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action at the end:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂 Great work overall!

Hi @chris-nessier-2-2! Your profile photo and Banner image look great!

Your headline is also looking good but this line is a little confusing “I am an expert Realtor helping clients through listening to your real needs!”

You can instead say “EXPERT Realtor helping clients find their dream home!” or something that condenses what you have written.

About Section:

I love what you have written but the paragraphs are super chunky. Try to break them up a bit so they’re easier to read.

Like this:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/joannbrothers/

Everything else looks great!