1 year, 9 months ago-
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Hey there @hannelore-schleicher, your link to your profile doesn’t work – would you be able to click on it and see if it works for you?
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Hi,
No I can’t open my account! Not certain what went wrong. The home page changed to Professional Community which I didn’t have before. Also, I received following message from Linked
Access to your account has been temporarily restricted
Why did this happen?
We take proactive actions to protect you when we detect potential unauthorized access or other activity that doesn’t comply with our policies.
We take proactive actions to protect you when we detect potential unauthorized access or other activity that doesn’t comply with our policies.
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Hi,
The restriction has been removed! Please try below link.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/hannelore-schleicher-at-corecoastalrealty/
Thank you,
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Hi there, @hannelore-schleicher! Wonderful – thank you, below are my comments:
Your profile photo is lovely but it looks a bit out of date due to the sepia coloring. Could you have someone take a photo of you smiling and upload a high-quality photo? This will really help it pop and add a professional touch.
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. If you have a logo you want added, send it through email to our graphic designer.
Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
Headline (words under name):
What you currently have written is “Lets talk if you’re looking selling your home quickly for top dollars!” BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Also, you HAVE some good content but I would like you to make it less resume and about you, and more about your clients and what you can do for them.
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action – needed at the very end:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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