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If you could live anywhere in the world, what would that look like? What’s keeping you from reaching that goal? Get out in FRONT of the competition….ASK ME HOW
Well, look no further, let me HELP take the stress out of where to begin as I have for all my current and past clients. You have enough to take care of so let me handle this end for you. Here is a little of what I can do for you……I will come and evaluate and assess your property, provide “no charge” staging of your home, and prepare all marketing materials. As a Coldwell Banker agent, my resources are endless, so once we prepare your home to sell, we now market your listing to over 900 websites because you don’t know where your buyer will be coming from.
Still don’t think you can afford to prepare your home with repairs before listing? I can even provide those funds you may need to make those improvements. I will market your property for the highest possible profit.
Now sit back and relax and no more stressing about where to begin and who to call …… I’m right here ready to go to get the highest possible exposure and results for you, so call me today to discuss your options…… 443-987-4021
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Hi @joann-brothers, this is a great start! When I first started reading this, it took me to the 2nd paragraph to know what your services are and I feel like your attention grabber, in the beginning, could be a bit more specific to your ideal client. I love your points – let’s just organize them a bit more!
Plug the content above into this template below and I feel that will really help you with the direction of your message.
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Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?Want __________?
(after you ask 3 questions)
If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!
Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.
(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)
If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.
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Thanks Negeen: I followed your instructions and figured it out!!! Another WIN OF THE WEEK!!
Are you WANTING to live anywhere in the world and, if so, what would that look like?
Do you NEED help reaching that goal with LESS STRESS?
If you answered “YES” to those questions, you came to the right place!!!
Hi, I’m JoAnn and I am a successful real estate agent helping clients with both selling and buying their dream homes. As a Coldwell Banker agent, my resources are endless to provide you with the best marketing strategies to over 900 websites getting you the MAXIMUM profit. I also provide an assessment and evaluation of your home with staging at NO CHARGE to my clients.
OH AND ONE MORE THING!!! Still think you are not ready because you have so much to prepare and can’t afford to make any improvement? Well, I can take care of that for you as well! Just ask me how to GET the FUNDS you need NOW!!
If you want MORE INFORMATION then message me here on Linkedin to see if we’re a good fit.
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Hi @joann-brothers, this is fantastic!!! Super proud of your revision 🙂
Here are your next steps:
Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.
It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.
Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
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Good morning Negeen
I finally figured out how to upload my video with Halle’s suggestion and I have it uploaded to YouTube for you to review. my YouTube name is joannneedlemanbrothers However it did cut off the last sentence. I need to know how to hide the ring light reflection in my glasses. Thanks and I look forward to hearing back from you.
Best regards
JoAnn
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Hi @joann-brothers! Amazing – so i wasn’t able to find the video. Make sure the viewership is either under “public” or “unlisted”.
And, click on the video. Once you do, send me the URL in the address bar and send it here please. This will help me go straight to the video and watch it 🙂
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Hi Negeen: This has certainly been a challenge but I believe the infomercial is loaded below (hopefully) Please let me know how to get the glare of the ring light adjusted to not show on my glasses and I would welcome any other adjustments needed. This is a rough first draft for sure. Thank you.
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Hi @joann-brothers, I am so proud of you! You are seriously a natural in front of the camera!
How about your film in front of a window instead of a ring light and see how the glare is? Also, would you be able to film your video horizontally?
Practice your script a pinch more but otherwise, this video is good! You can even post this on Facebook for your followers/friends/family.
Super proud of you. If you want to refilm later in the future, you can do that too, and keep going through the program 🙂
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Hi Jaon,
I’m curious how you provide those funds?
I do a fair amount of listings.
Per this paragraph:
Still don’t think you can afford to prepare your home with repairs before listing? I can even provide those funds you may need to make those improvements. I will market your property for the highest possible profit.
Victor F
SA, TX
210-383-9622
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Hi @joann-brothers, tagging you in the post above 🙂
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