Hi there, @drew-cifrodelli! It is wonderful to have you here in the program with us.

Please keep in mind that the Perfect Client exercise is only a lesson for you. This will not require feedback, it is mainly a lesson to get clear on who you want to work with. Once you have a good idea of that, the Profile Accelerator Lesson in Module 1 will be a lot easier for you.

With that said, will you please reply and let me know that you are ready for your LinkedIn profile review?

Thank you – once I hear back, I will review your page for you!

Hi @drew-cifrodelli, wonderful! Below are my comments for revision:

Your profile photo is lovely!

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. What you have of just the logo is okay but I feel we can do a lot more visually in this section. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Real Estate Broker/Owner Zweet Zpot Real Estate”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

I like how you’re starting off your sales letter talking to your client but when I read this, it doesn’t flow well or grab my attention. You have a lot of information that may need to be broken up and reorganized.

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

I’d personally love you to lead your readers through what you do, who you work with, how you can help them, and why they should work with you. The examples above should really help you with finding that voice.

Call to action (at the end):

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

Yes, that looks perfect @drew-cifrodelli!!

Hey @drew-cifrodelli, that looks great!! You are good to move forward – awesome work!

We currently do not have any sample job postings at this moment, apologies for that!