Hey @mitch-frisch, great work on your profile! Few comments:

Please email Lindsey, our graphic designer, and have her create a custom banner image for you – I like what you have but the quality is low and you could do a lot with this space.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline looks great!

About section:

Again, this section has one HUGE paragraph. Don’t complicate it – you HAVE good content, it just needs to be organized.

You can go to Kent’s LinkedIn profile about section, copy and paste his outline and just add your own content to it. This is what we teach in the program.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Please make changes to your About section and i’d be happy to review.

@mitch-frisch, did you email Lindsey about your background banner image? I want to confirm.

In your About section remove “ABOUT” from the sales letter message because it’s the first thing people see and it doesn’t need to be there.

TOO COMPLEX: Specialize in coastal residential properties along the Southern California Riviera Coastline

Instead, you can say:

I help clients like YOU sell your home with strategic marketing in the Southern Orange County California area!

(you want to make it easy to read)

Would the average person know what ‘Engel & Voelkers shops’ is?? If not, make sure to either remove or explain what that is.

Everything else looks good!! You can move forward!!