Should be the last time!

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    • September 17, 2022 at 2:06 pm #49743

      Roger Jarnigan
      Participant
        @Roger@acalifornialifestyle.com

        Please do another look. I may have changed it to much.

        I value your opinion.

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/rogerjarnigan/

         

        Thanks

      • September 19, 2022 at 10:13 am #49751

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          WOW @roger-jarnigan, what a transformation!!!!! This looks superb!

          Remove the capital H and the “&” symbol from this sentence – just write out “and”:

          “I Handle all the details eliminating your STRESS & UNCERTAINTY of the sale.”

          Who do I work with….. YOU? (remove the question mark, or list a couple of examples and then say you).

           

          Everything looks amazing – please move forward and wonderful job!

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