Hi @luis-figueroa, thank you for submitting your profile for the review! Below are my comments:

Your profile photo has a lot going on but I do like how you were featured on those networks. I’d recommend having a professional photo of you smiling at eye level with the camera. Then, for your banner background image, you can add all of the logos for networks you’ve been featured on. So, find a profile photo you can use without anything other than your face in it. You can send that to our graphic designer, Lindsey, and she can add a white background for you to really make it pop out and shine as professional.

Here is her email: Lindsey@coredm.com

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email Lindsey, what your field of work is and she will create something custom for you. Have anything logos or network logos you want to be added? Let her know and she can do that 🙂

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Marketing Specialist at Youcanconverttosales.com”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are imperative.

Right now, when I’m reading your About section, I don’t have a clear idea of WHAT you do, WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients or WHY they should work with you.

Based on the teachings of the profile accelerator lesson, this is the “meat and potatoes” of your profile so you really want to make it less about you and more about your perfect client.

Please review the lesson again.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should help you with coming up with a good sales letter outline.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action needed at the very end:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂