Hi there, @glen-langford! Thank you so much for your patience – when I click on the link, its showing up as not available to preview. Can you click on the link you sent above and see if it works for you? If not, please try sending it again:

• go to your LinkedIn profile page
• copy the URL in the address bar
• paste here

Hey there, @glen-langford! Thank you so much for providing that link for me once more – I was able to access your page! Below are my comments:

I like your banner image but it seems to be cut off by your profile photo. Please email this to Lindsey, our graphic designer, and see if she can fix this or create a new banner image for you!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Great profile photo! If you have something similar but with you smiling, that may also be a better bet so your page seems more approachable.

Headline is best if it focuses on either buyers or sellers (pick whichever excites you most and then in your About section you can add both) but what you have looks AWESOME!

About Section:

Immediately I could tell that you have GOOD content but it needs to be better organized with your points and a call to action at the end. Also, let’s have your testimonials 1-3 sentences long so it’s not too chunky 🙂

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂