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Hi there @tracy-burgess! Thank you for submitting your profile for a review! Below are my comments:
Your profile photo is lovely! Can you zoom out a pinch so your hair isn’t cut off? Also, please send it via email to Lindsey, our graphic designer, and have her add a white background for you. This will help your photo stand out.
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. What you have is good but i feel like we add a better professional touch to it. Please also email Lindsey, what your field of work is and she will create something custom for you. You can send her any logos or info you want added!
Headline (words under name):
Looks awesome!!
About Section:
What you have is on the right path!
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
I like waht you have written but try to not make the paragraph too chunky – break it up a bit.
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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