Hi @jimmy-hardcastle, thank you for submitting your profile for another review! Below are my comments:

Your banner image looks great!

Your profile photo is on the right path – I may want to recommend another photo to use because this one looks like the sun is in your eyes. Whenever you do choose a profile photo, please send it to Lindsey and have her add a white background for you. This will really make it pop!

Headline (words under name): 

What you currently have written is “Real Estate Agent at Argo Group Properties” and based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

Right now, your message is looking like a resume format and less like a sale letter.

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program!

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action (you need one at the end):

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!