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Hey @stephanie-tanis, thank you for submitting your profile for the review! Below are my comments:
Your profile photo is lovely but it’s a bit dark and could use a white background to make it look a big more professional. If you send it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, she can add that for you!
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is and she will create something custom for you. If you have a logo or phone number added, send it over and she will add it.
Headline (words under name):
In my opinion, your headline has the right idea but it seems like It’s less about service and more about how much someone is paying. I want you to think about your perfect client and what they’re looking for and then when it comes to cost, you can discuss that with them on the phone if they inquire.
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
Right now, every sentence is starting with “I” and we’d like you to challenge yourself and try to start a few of your sentences with “you” so it’s directed more to your clients and less about you.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program!
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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