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    • #48810

      Paula Martin
      Participant
        @paulaspeople@comcast.net

        Running your own business? No Time to sell your property for Top Dollar?

        Just the thought of taking on any new items, to do so is extremely stressful!

        Let me do the work for you! I will handle all the details, down to keeping your house buyer showable!

        Keeping showings for only approved buyers, on your schedule made in advance!

        No need to have to talk to anyone on a daily basis, unless you want to!  I can send a daily update via

        text or email. I will get the most money for your property possible, with out all the hassle and stress

        on your part!

        Contact me at you convenience, to see if I am the answer you’ve been looking for! Let me sell your property hassle free, for top dollar!

      • #48817

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi, @paula-martin – this is an awesome start! Some of your sentences are assuming, which is good, but you also want to have some questions in there to strengthen your message. Additionally, i’d love for you to introduce yourself somewhere in there.

          How about you plug in your content into this outline…

          How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

           

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

           

        • #48954

          Paula Martin
          Participant
            @paulaspeople@comcast.net

            Hi Negeen,

            (So sorry for spelling your name wrong in the earlier message.)

            This video has been a challenge for me. I need to redo with less hesitation and lipstick!, before posting publicly. I am  very conscious of my twisted looking face and really don’t want to post a video of myself. I’ve been trying to suck it up! I had bells palsey some years back, it paralyzed half my face, that  caused damage to nerves in my face, permanently. I hate making videos of me!

            Link to my youtube 1st video;

            https://youtube.com/shorts/SOoMLvYTJKQ?feature=share

            I believe its 53 seconds long.

            text;

            Do you know you can have a goldmine in your own back yard?

            Would you put your house on the market, if you knew you would get top dollar?

            Do you Dread all the work and time it takes to prepare your house for listing and sale?

            Hi I’m Paula Martin, I’m a local Real Estate Professional. With 16 yrs experience working

            closely with my clients, to help them achieve their dream sale effortlessly. ]

            Everything from yard work, to upkeep of you home for showings, anything task that needs to

            be done to sell your property. I work hard so you don’t have to.  Helping to create a stress

            free environment , from listing to sold.

            So contact me  925.783.5450, so we can chat and see if we are a good fit.  Maybe the next

            house I sell will be yours?

             

            Thank you for your time!

             

          • #48986

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi there @paula-martin! You are an absolute NATURAL on camera!! I loved your demeanor and your energy – it was very infectious 🙂

              I did see 2 bits of hesitation with the texts towards the end but it’s completely normal and fine.

              I personally feel like this is good for now and if you choose to refilm in the future you can!

              Super proud of you for pushing through this!!

               

            • #49200

              Paula Martin
              Participant
                @paulaspeople@comcast.net

                Hi Negeen,

                Thank you for the awesome support! I tried very hard to keep in under the time limit. I am afraid if I added more, or changed the content, it would be impossible to keep the infomercial short.

                I have been getting reminders for tech calls, and was wondering if I am suppose to be there for the meetings, or if they are just old reminders.  I am unable to access any more lessons or open up modules. Is this a tech problem or something else? Please advise. You have my email address, if it should be private. I can not move forward if I can’t access. Please advise. Thank you!

                 

                 

                 

              • #49203

                n d
                Keymaster
                  @negeen@coredm.com

                  Hi @paula-martin, you did great!!

                  So, with the technical calls, they’re now every Monday at 1pm EST and they are optional. I would reach out to our support email and see if there’s something with your account that’s preventing the access –> help@coredm.com 

                   

                   

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