Hi @gae-callaway, I’m happy to review your profile! Is that what you are requesting?

Hi @gae-callaway, please see my comments below:

Your background image is super attention grabbing! If you ever want to update it, Lindsey, our graphic designer can create something new for you. Also, she can update your profile photo if you ever need the help.

Lindsey@coredm.com (reach her via email)

Headline (words under name): 

What you currently have written is “Callaway Resources and LegalShield”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

About section:

What you have looks GREAT! Just try to break up some of the paragraphs a bit more. I would also recommend you replace “I” with “you” so its more centered on your clients and less on you.

Breaking up the paragraphs would look like this profile example:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Call to action:

This needs to be stronger.

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!