3 replies, 2 voices Last updated by n d 2 years, 7 months ago
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    • #48519

      Bill Toujouse
      Participant
        @btoujouse@gmail.com

        @negeen-dargahi

        For my headline, Halle suggested the following:

        I help clients secure capital funding, repair their credit score (if needed), and find money to expand their business.👉 Message Me!
        Thoughts?
        Bill

         

      • #48530

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @bill-toujouse! What about this:

          Are YOU Looking To Expand And Scale Your Business For Top Profit? Need Help With Your Credit Score?☆ I’m An EXPERT Financial Advisor Helping Clients ☆ ☞ Message me!

          You can remove “I’m An EXPERT Financial Advisor Helping Clients” if you want, I just added an example. 

        • #48533

          Bill Toujouse
          Participant
            @btoujouse@gmail.com

            @negeen-dargahi

             

            How about this:

             

            Are you looking for funding for your business? Need help with improving your credit score? Message me!

          • #48550

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @bill-toujouse, it looks similar to my example which I believe you should use! What you have looks great!

               

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