2 years, 7 months ago-
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Hi Negeen
Here is my LI profile (see below).
https://www.linkedin.com/in/btoujouse
I would appreciate your thoughts. I am still working on my about section. Any ideas would be very helpful.
Thanks,
Bill
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Hi there @bill-toujouse! Thank you for submitting for review – below are my comments and suggestions:
I really like your background photo but it’s partially cut off by your profile photo. I’d like you to email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and have her create a custom banner background image based on your field of work. Let’s see if that helps.
Great profile photo!
Headline: the headline Halle suggested was great, go ahead and use that!
About section:
EXCELLENT About section – it instantly gripped me and provided all the information a potential client would need!
Your call to action at the end could improve. How about this:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
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Excellent work overall 🙂
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