Hi @victor-ferrer, thank you for submitting your profile for review. Below are my comments for revision:

Your profile photo is nice but it’s very blurry. Do you have a photo of higher quality you could upload? Also, your profile photo could look a lot more professional with a white background. Our graphic designer, Lindsey can add that for you. Please EMAIL her the photo and she will add it for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com 

You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.

Headline (words under name):

What you currently have written is “Realtor, Recruiter at RE/MAX Posh Properties”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

Here is one example:

Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

About Section:

Please go back through the lesson to get a better idea of what we’d like you to have in this section.

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

How about asking 3 short and powerful pain point questions.

I’d like you to write a sales letter and make it mostly about how you help your clients.

You want to tell them: WHAT you do, WHO you work with, HOW you help, and WHY they should work with you.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action // at the end of your message:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂