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    • #48107

      Becky Santarina
      Participant
        @beckysantarina@rocketmail.com

        Are you tired of renting and wish you had your very own home?  Scared and don’t know where to begin or know if it’s even possible?  No worries, I am here for you!  So let’s make your dream a reality!  Through me, you will be educated in an easy to understand real estate, be hand held if preferred, as we go through the process from beginning to end. You can have the confidence in me as the go to agent for all your Real Estate questions or needs for years to come and I give you my assurance that I’ve got your best interest at all times.

        Pick up the phone and call me today at (209) 640-7768.

      • #48114

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @becky-santarina! VERY good start on this. Try to fill out this template as you may need a bit more information:

          How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

           

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

           

          (after you ask 3 questions)

           

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

           

        • #48164

          Becky Santarina
          Participant
            @beckysantarina@rocketmail.com

            Here’s the revised infomercial:

             

            Are you WANTING to move and own a home?

            Do you NEED help to get starter?

            Want to upgrade or downsize?

            If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

            Hi, I’m Becky Santarina and I am a  real estate consultant helping educate first time buyers. My goal is to help you find the proper financing for your future home.

            When you work with me, I have your best interest at all times.  I’ll make sure  conditions are met in a timely manner and get you moved in asap.

            If you want an agent who cares about her clients,  then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

             

          • #48168

            n d
            Keymaster
              @negeen@coredm.com

              Hi @becky-santarina, nice work – your message is short, sweet, and right to the point!!

              Here are your next steps:

              Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.

              It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

              Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
              high quality. Just look at the angle of the video and the lighting.

               

            • #48177

              Becky Santarina
              Participant
                @beckysantarina@rocketmail.com

                Hi Negeen,

                Thanks but you don’t think it’s to short?

                 

                 

                • #48178

                  n d
                  Keymaster
                    @negeen@coredm.com

                    Hi @becky-santarina – for your 30-second infomercial, the more information you add, it will of course be more beneficial. What you have is a good amount as well. It is your decision if you have more information to add. In the template I provided above, there is an option to add more content.

                    If you would like to add more content and have me review it, please let me know by tagging me and i’d love to review.

                    Thank you!

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