Linkedin profile review

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- November 29, 2021 at 10:53 am #48064
  Ann Behrens
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  @ann.behrens@cbmoves.com
  Good morning Negeen,
  
  Please take a look at my profile and let me know what changes I need to make. Also one of the videos mentioned customizing the LinkedIn link(?), but I must have missed how to do that. Can you help?
  
  https://www.linkedin.com/in/ann-behrens-20774827/
- November 29, 2021 at 11:59 am #48066
  Ben Carpenetti
  Participant
  @bencarpenetti@me.com
  Hi @ann-behrens
  
  @ben-carpenetti here
  
  I just happened to see your request.
  
  I hope you can appreciate the feedback to make you even more successful.
  
  I am not a realtor.
  1. We are not connected so, the message button is locked. I am not sure how to unlock it and you might need to talk to @negeen-dargahi
  2. Cut out What I do in a few words.
  3. I can SELL your home for Top Dollar, Fast, and with Less Stress. I SELL your home Stress-free.
- November 30, 2021 at 7:21 am #48075
  Ann Behrens
  Participant
  @ann.behrens@cbmoves.com
  Hello Ben,
  
  Thank you for your feedback. The last sentence of #3 is the same as the last part of the sentence before so, I would be repeating myself. I don’t think that works well.
- November 30, 2021 at 2:36 pm #48078
  n d
  Keymaster
  @negeen@coredm.com
  Hi @ann-behrens! Great job taking action on your profile – below are my comments!
  
  I love your profile photo – very professional and engaging!
  
  You also need a background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.
  
  Lindsey@coredm.com
  
  Headline:
  
  You have a great headline, just keep the capitalized words consistent. Either every word is capitalized or at the beginning of the sentence is. I would recommend every first letter of every word be capitalized.
  
  About section:
  
  AWESOME job and even better content. Very happy with everything you have written!!
  
  //
  
  Custom Link:
  
  This article by LinkedIn should help you make those changes 😉
  
  https://www.linkedin.com/help/linkedin/answer/87/customize-your-public-profile-url?lang=en
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