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Hi there @laurie-sutton! It is great to have you here in the program with us!
Excellent profile photo! Very professional and engaging.
You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you. What you have is OK but it’s not great.
Headline (words under name):
What you currently have written is “Licensed Realtor and owner of The Laurie Sutton Group at simpliHŌM” BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!
Here is one example:
Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!
About Section:
I like how you’re starting off your sales letter with a pain point question – but the remainder Is too heavily focused on you and not enough on them. I challenge you to replace “I” with “you”.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
I want you to share HOW you help your clients and WHO you work with.
Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is what we look for in a profile:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/
Testimonials
These look very good but I would only have 3 listed with each of them no more that 2-4 sentences.
Call to action (you need one at the very end)
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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