Hi there @jennifer-faure! You did a great job taking action on your profile and I’m happy to be providing you with feedback!

Your profile photo is lovely – could you zoom in a little bit more so there isn’t too much empty space on the left?

You also need a background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

(please email Lindsey again if she has not replied – she typically is very responsive)

Headline (words under name):

YES, this looks awesome!!

About Section:

I like your content but it is waaaaaay too focused on YOU and not enough on THEM.

I challenge you to write this as a sales letter to your Perfect Client.

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is what we look for in a profile:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

Hi @jennifer-faure! AWESOME job – your profile looks so great and has nice improvements! You are good to move forward 🙂