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      JANET MCHUGH
      Participant
        @janmchugh49@gmail.com

        Would you like to know how to save money and headaches when buying a home?  As a relocation specialist, I help people all the time much like yourself, looking to move or retire to the Charleston, SC.  greater area.  On an average, I can save you from$1000. to $10,000 in overall costs of buying a home.  Give me a call, days, nights, weekends or even holidays.  It doesn’t matter.  Just reach out to me at 854-219-3222.  I am Janet McHugh, your neighborhood expert.  Would you like to see available properties now?  Go to jans.homes and view beautiful homes for any budget.  See you Soon!

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        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi there @janet-mchugh-2! This is an awesome start – I love all of the specific numbers you provided in your infomercial! I’m going to add a fun template for you to fill in below because I think you could use more “alpha energy” in your message as well as a bit more content.

          ow about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

           

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

           

          (after you ask 3 questions)

           

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

           

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