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    • #47903

      Vic Love
      Participant
        @victoria@cfservices-inc.com

        I would like to get my linked in profile reviewed.

        I have the link in the system with HECP, and it has not updated with my updated profile information.

        Here is the link to the new one: https://www.linkedin.com/in/victoria-love-50237239/

      • #47996

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi there @victoria-love! Your LinkedIn profile is going to be a separate website from this program/website, just for clarity.

          Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:

          Your profile photo is lovely but it’s very blurry. Do you have a photo of higher quality you could upload?

          You also need a better background banner image behind your profile photo. Please also email our graphic designer, Lindsey, what your field of work is in and she will create something custom for you.

          Lindsey@coredm.com

          Headline (words under name):

          What you currently have written is “Realtor, GRI, ABR, SRES, ePRO PSA, CNE, BA, Investor, Consultant, Fiduciary at HomeSmart”  BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

          Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

          Here is one example:

          Want SEASIDE Living With RESORT Amenities? ☆ I’m An EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In Hilton Head Island☆ ☞ Message me!

          About Section:

          I like how you’re starting off your sales letter talking about the wild west but you also want to assure your perfect client that WHEN they work with you, they can feel confident knowing that you will support and take care of them 100% of the way.

          When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

          Also, you HAVE all the content, it just needs to be better organized 🙂

          Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.

          https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

          Here is what we look for in a profile:

          https://www.linkedin.com/in/danielgagnonre/

          Call to action:

          If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

          Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
           

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