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      Theresa Gardiner
      Participant
        @Theresaburroughs@gmail.com

        @negeen-dargahi  Please review this profile

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/douglasgardinerre/

         

        Thanks.

      • #47706

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi there @theresa-gardiner! Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:

          GREAT profile photo. Can you send it to Lindsey, our graphic designer, via email? She will add a white background for you to make it look more professional.

          You also need a better background photo. Please tell her your field of work and she will create something custom for you!

          Lindsey@coredm.com

          Headline (words under name):

          AWESOME work – immedietly grabbed my attention!

          Summary:

          You have some SUPER content but it just needs a little bit more because it ends too soon.

          You want to tell us WHO you work with, HOW you help, and WHY we should work with you (which I know you do, but just a bit more content).

          Here is an example of a profile in your field:

          https://www.linkedin.com/in/renita-baldwin-realtor%C2%AE-at-quality-choice-solutions-llc-314695197/

          Call to action:

          If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

          Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions and super job 🙂

           

           

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