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Hey there @jerry-thomas! Nice job submitting your profile for the review! Below are my comments for revision.
You have a nice professional profile photo but I think it would be so much more inviting if you were smiling 🙂
If you have another option with you smiling, that would be even better! Zoom in a little bit more as well.
You need a background/banner image. If you email, Lindsey, our graphic designer, she can create something custom for you. Tell her what field of work you’re in and she will create that for you!
Headline (words under name):
What you currently have is “Broker/Owner at JGThomas Realty LLC” and based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
Or if you’re a realtor, you could use:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
About Section:
Right now, a lot of this is about you and not enough about your perfect client. Remember, this is a sales letter and less of a resume format.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Try to ask 3 powerful and short pain point questions to really grip your readers!
Also, you HAVE some good content, it just needs to be better organized!
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those chunky paragraphs and having a more concise message.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Here is an example of a Realtor profile: https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
Call to action (you need one):
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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