2 years, 11 months ago-
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I am really confused on what I am supposed to be doing. Believe me I am no writer so I am struggling with all these parts. I have copied most of it from others. Am I supposed to be letting ya’ll look over every section that I do so that you can give feedback?
Thanks
Renita Baldwin
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Hey there @renita-baldwin! Totally fine if you’re using an outline and filling in your own information! What field are you in?
What I’d like you to do is fill in your actual LinkedIn profile with the contents of your Profile Accelerator that was submitted and emailed to you.
Once your LinkedIn profile has enough content and is ready to be reviewed (it doesn’t have to be perfect), send me a direct URL link to your LinkedIn profile and I will review it.
If this is still confusing, please let me know!
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Hi Negeen Dargahi,
Here’s my LinkedIn link for review!
(19) Renita Baldwin REALTOR® at Quality Choice Solutions LLC | LinkedIn
Thanks
Renita
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Hey there, @renita-baldwin! It’s so wonderful having you in the program with us! Below are my comments for revision:
GREAT profile photo! Can you please email that photo to Lindsey, our graphic designer, and ask her to add a white background for you? This will really help it pop!
You also need a better background/banner image. Please also tell Lindsey in that email, your field of work, and she will create something better!
Headline look AWESOME! One tiny change:
Want to SELL Your Home FAST with ZERO Stress?☆ Now Is The PERFECT Time To Sell Your Home in this HOT MARKET☆☞ Message Me!
About Section:
You had a VERY good start but it seems like it came to an abrupt stop. There’s a lot more content that you could add:
WHO do you work with, HOW do you help your clients, WHY should they pick you?
Here is an example of a realtors profile: https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
GOOD WORK!
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I Negeen,
I’ve updated but I don’t know where to put the Call to Action part.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/renita-baldwin-realtor%C2%AE-at-quality-choice-solutions-llc-314695197/
Renita Baldwin
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Hey @renita-baldwin! Your call to action will go at the very end of your About section/sales message 🙂
Also, feel free to add a little bit more content explaining what and how you help your clients.
Everything else looks awesome!
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