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      Paul Schiliro
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        @paulschiliro@hannacre.com

        @halle-eavelyn @kent-littlejohn2 @negeen-dargahi

        Hi Everyone,  appreciate your feedback/input as to how this headline sounds…………..

        As a Top Commercial Real Estate Agent with over 20 years Commercial Brokerage Experience, 10 years Fortune 500 Corporate Real Estate Experience, and a former Certified Public Accountant, I am uniquely positioned to help you maximize the value of your asset disposition, or purchase or lease the perfect real estate asset to maximize your business’ performance.

      • #47481

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Good morning, @paul-schiliro! This is a very good start but keep the focus on them when you’re speaking to your perfect client. Less “I” and more “you”.

          How about you put that inside of this template and copy and paste it into your headline slot:

          Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞Message Me!

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