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I am in the program and happened upon your request, so we are all still learning.
I sent you an invite.
When I tried to message you I was not able to do that.
You may need to update your contact info to allow people who are not connected to you to see your email and phone number.
I don’t know how to do that, so @negeen-dargahi should be able to help you to do that.
Ben
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Hey there @amy-brown!Nice job taking action on your profile! Below are my comments:
Good profile photo!
You need a BETTER background photo – I’d like it to be better related to your business.
Can you please email Lindsey, our graphic designer, and tell her a little about your field of business – she will be able to create something better for you.
Headline (words under name):
Looks awesome!!!
About Section:
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.
Right now, your sales letter is a little bit too scattered. Let’s tell your perfect client, WHAT you do, WHO you work with, and HOW you help them.
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those chunky paragraphs and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Testimonials should also be 1-3 sentences long, try to condense yours a little 😉
Call to action (you need one at the end):
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions 🙂
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