Hi there @julie-sims! It’s so great to have you here in the program with us! Below are my comments:

Great job emailing Lindsey – she will also be able to edit your profile photo and add a white background for you. When you ask her, please have her brighten up your photo. Then, once she sends it back, be sure to zoom in a bit more so we can clearly see your face.

Lindsey usually takes up to 48 hours – she’s quite responsive. If you don’t hear back from her tomorrow, I would ping her once more.

GREAT headline!!

About Section:

Right now, your message is quite short and there is a headline at the beginning of your about section. What we’d like to see is a sales letter that leads your potential client to see WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients and WHY they should work with you.

Check out this Realtor profile as an example you can get inspiration from:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

I love the way you are speaking to your readers, I would just like to see more information 🙂

Check out the example and revise as best as you can and tag me please!

I like it quite a bit, just needs a background.

The profile pic is really good and the message is excellent.

The only thing I’d say, is the headline and about section need more. Without getting too wordy it needs just a bit more meat….who, how, why. Some of the non-bulleted points, jsut need the thought completed.

Kinda like the sentence, “I love red roses because.” Because why? What’s it mean to me and how do I connect with the thought?

Maybe a poor analogy but, “WIFM”, What’s in it for me, why’s it important to me, consider this because?

Steve