3 years, 2 months ago-
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Hi,
I have completed my linkedin profile although I am still waiting for my recommendations to add later.
Could I please get your feedback?
Thanks! 😏
https://www.linkedin.com/in/csilla-florida-realtor/
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Hi there @csilla-florida! Great to have you in the program with us – below are my comments on your profile 🙂
Great profile photo and headline!! Proud of your work on those.
Your banner image is ok – it could be more professional and better related to your business. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, our graphic designer, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!
About Section:
You have GREAT content and I imagine you modeled this after Halle’s profile but I personally would recommend you lead your readers through a sales letter and fewer bullet points.
Like this:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/
^ this is how Kent has written his
There are also way too many emojis and it’s making it hard to read what you’ve written.
If you’re able to remove the bullet points and the excessive emojis and turn it into a sales letter that leads your clients, this will be perfect 🙂
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