Dashboard Forums High End Client Program LinkedIn – Infomercial Reviews & Questions 30 second infomercial – please critique

3 replies, 2 voices Last updated by n d 3 years, 2 months ago
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    • #46945

      Vinda Milless
      Participant
        @vinda@milless.com

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      • #46955

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hey @vinda-milless! Very attention-grabbing but will a lot of people relate to this? Are the majority of your clients wanting to move closer to family? Keep this in mind when you fill out this template below – I think it’ll really help you build some points and add more content 🙂

          (I know you asked pain point questions above, this is just the general template)

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

          (after you ask 3 questions)

           

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

           

        • #46960

          Vinda Milless
          Participant
            @vinda@milless.com

            I think your first question may be right. Two different people came to mind when I tried to come up with my ideal client so I focused on them. They may be my ideal client, but they are not necessarily my most common client. I think I’m going to go back and change my ideal client and start over.

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