Hi there, @david-gullifer! It was so nice speaking with you last week – please see my comments below on your profile:

I’d like our graphic designer, Lindsey, to create a new banner for you and Maria. She does a fantastic job! Please share with her any logos you’d like added to your banner as well as your field of business – she will create a better banner image for you both to use.

Additionally in that email, please send her a high-quality photo of yourself that isn’t grainy and have her add a white background for you to really make it pop.

Here is her email: Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

Right now you have written “Owner, Broker at Prolific Real Estate” and based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Example you can use or tweak:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

About Section:

The beginning of your profile is super important – I like how yours is starting off but I just want to help redo the first 3 lines. See if you like this…

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WHAT I DO IN 15 WORDS OR LESS…

I help clients like YOU sell homes fasters and above the market to qualified buyers.

Essentially…

As an EXPERT listing broker, I allow you to focus on your LIFE (upcoming move, family, career) INSTEAD of thinking about selling your home.

You can eliminating the STRESS of selling your home and actually make it an ENJOYABLE process.

YES, you read that right.

Clients that work with me can relax knowing I take care of all tedious paperwork and processing along the way and keep you 100% in the loop!

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David, notice how I removed a lot of the “I” that you had in some sections of your profile? This helps make it less about you and more about them. Also, please remove any unnecessarily capitalized words.

I challenge you to try to replace “I” with “you”.

Your message is on the right path – looking GOOD. Please make those tweaks ^

You could have a stronger call to action:

If you’re ready for [STRONG PAIN POINT] then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

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Please tag me in your revision! 🙂