Hi there, @paula-martin! I know you wanted a stand-out profile, and we are able to do that, but my initial feedback had lots of good general tips i’d like you to apply. Would you please look back over that and take massive imperfect action? 🙂

Hey @paula-martin, have you emailed Lindsey about the banner image?? If not, please do so because you need a background image.

Lindsey@coredm.com 

Headline:

I like the direction you’re going but I think it would be better to make it POP with this instead:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

About Section:

I like that you started off asking pain point questions! Only ask 3 and remove “call me” — your call to action only belongs at the end.

Your paragraphs are very thick – break them up.

I’d like your profile to look like this:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with organization and format.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!