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      Joanna Myers
      Participant
        @joanna.myers@cbpacific.com

        Draft:

        Are you facing the overwhelming task of moving?  What if you sold your home and needed a place to go?  What do you do with all your years of accumulated items and stuff?  How does the process work and where can I find help?

        What if you had a stable datum, a person who would help you through the process step by step keeping your individual goals in mind while moving toward  the final result of a completed sale and money in the bank?  And, what if the process were smooth and with limited stress due to the professional training and years of experience of your agent?

        This is what I do, and the clients I help can be sure that my fiduciary duty to you will be upheld throughout the process. I will save you energy and time and legal headaches.

        Please contact me to see if we make a good fit to work together!

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

         

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      • #46288

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @joanna-myers, this is a great start!! You are asking a bit too many questions but fill them into this template to better organize your message 🙂

          Are you WANTING _________?
          Do you NEED __________?

          Want __________?

           

          (after you ask 3 questions)

           

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

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          n d
          Keymaster
            @negeen@coredm.com

            @joanna-myers, here you can post your revision 🙂

             

          • #46388

            Joanna Myers
            Participant
              @joanna.myers@cbpacific.com

              Do you want TOP DOLLAR without stress?

              Do you need help in NAVIGATING the selling process?

              Do you demand full attention to DETAIL throughout the selling process?

               

              I am an EXPERIENCED realtor who can help:

              • I work with you to customize MARKETING  PLANS to sell your   home for you:
              •  You will receive ADVICE on how to prepare your home for listing.
              •  You will receive STAGING at my cost for you.
              •  You will receive higher than asking OFFERS from qualified buyers     negotiated for you.
              • I work with you through the process helping you understand the laws, terms and legal pitfalls thorough out the many documents and paperwork involved in selling a home in today’s market.

              If you need and want full service, please contact me!

              Joanna Myers (RB: 14854) at:  808-371-2812 or joanna.myers@cbpacific.com; joannamyers.cbintouch.com

               

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              n d
              Keymaster
                @negeen@coredm.com

                Hi @joanna-myers, this looks good but a few comments for revision.

                When you say “Do you want TOP DOLLAR without stress?” you have to be specific.

                Do you want top dollar selling your home that’s been sitting on the market?

                Are you ready for QUALIFIED buyers to view your home?

                Do you demand full attention to DETAIL throughout the selling process?

                If that sounds like you, you came to the right place!

                Hi, I’m @joanna-myers and I’m a realtor helping clients ________________.

                When you work with me, you will receive expert ADVICE on how to prepare your home for listing. What’s better? I actually stage your home at NO cost for you. This ensures your home is sold in the quickest time possible to qualified buyers negotiated for you!

                I work with you through the process helping you understand the laws, terms and legal pitfalls thorough out the many documents and paperwork involved in selling a home in today’s market. I also make sure you’re in the loop 100% of the time!

                If you’re READY to _____________ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

                 

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