Hi there, @tisha-brandes! Welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:

GREAT profile photo and background banner image!! Could you zoom in on your profile photo just a pinch more? I want to make sure people clearly see your face.

If you ever need any graphic design help in the future within the program, here is our graphic designers contact below:

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

I do like your headline BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Summary:

Remove your call to action from the middle of your sales letter and bring it to the very end. Also, shorten up your testimonials to 1-3 sentences long max.

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

You want to lead them into what you do, who you work with, and why they should work with you.

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you speak directly to your potential clients.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Here is a profile from a client: https://www.linkedin.com/in/paulgennuso/

Call to action:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!