30 SECOND INFOMERCIAL REVIEW

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    • March 22, 2021 at 11:52 pm #46064

      Damian Klinger
      Participant
        @six@jets.com

        Hello

        Please review our drafted infomercial and let us know how to improve.

         

        Do you enjoy traveling but what to avoid the crowds?

        Are you ready to visit family, friends and have Covid-19 safety protocol concerns?

        Does your company have multiple offices spread through out the countr/world?

        If you answered Yes to any of these questions you came to the right place!

        After 20 years of being in the private jet industry (10 as an owner) I know how to make each one of your flights completely seamless and most importantly ..SAFE! With Covid-19 in our presence safety is more important than ever!  At JETS.COM I have ensured that all crew members are following all safety protocols, disinfecting aircraft before and after the completion of the private flight. I will also take care of all of your catering and transportation needs. When flying private all you need to provide is your routing and passenger information and leave the rest to us! You will no longer need to worry about all the little details..and enjoy more time with your family and colleagues. If this sounds like something you are interested in please feel free to reach out at any time as I am available 24/7.

      • March 23, 2021 at 11:26 am #46069

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @mariah-six! You can take out “(10 as an owner)” just because it takes away from your powerful message.

          You could also have something like “have the LUXURY of flying on our jets, with a peace of mind” something that entices them that this is the way to go!

          This looked GOOD!!

          Here would be your next steps:

          Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.

          It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

          Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
          high quality. Just look at the angle of the video and the lighting.

          For you two, what would be nice is to have a green screen of a jet on the tarmac behind you both while you spoke, to really get them to visualize your message.

           

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