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      Dennis Barrett
      Participant
        @dlbarrett4@gmail.com

        @negeen-dargahi
        I was sure I sent this last Wednesday, but I do not see it anywhere so here I go again. I have created a draft script I would like reviewed prior to attempting to record it. Here it is: I had one section where I put two different lines of alternative text. Feedback?

        Are you a home owner who really would like to move into a home more suited to your current needs, and would love to sell at today’s rising prices and buy at today’s low interest rates?

        But maybe you fear trying to buy in today’s low inventory competitive market.

        Or
        You have heard of people selling their home so quickly they have to move, rent, and then move when they are finally able to buy their new home.

        Or
        You don’t want to have to be constantly keeping your home spotless and showing ready while it is listed. You might have kids to clean after, or you work from home .

        I solve these problems and have strategies and tools to help put you in your new home and sell with less stress, anxiety, and pain.

        Alternative text:
        I may be able to help you buy your new home before you sell your current home.

        I am Knock HomeSwap lender certified to help you buy your new home and move out before you have to sell. (must meet specific criteria)

        To find out how I help and determine if we are a good fit, message me or call me (303-513-2340) to schedule an appointment. When we talk ask me about my current financial incentive bonus.

      • #46033

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi there, @dennis-barrett!! This is a great start! A few tiny tweaks I’d like you to make:

          Only ask up to 3 pain point questions and then…

          (after you ask 3 questions)

          If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

          Hi, I’m Dennis Barrett and I am a _____ helping clients with _________.

          (2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)
          You can add what you have already written!

          (you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

          If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.

          🙂

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