Hi @pamela-duckworth! First off, welcome to the program, and nice work taking action on your profile!

Below is my feedback on changes I’d like you to make:

Your current profile photo is really dark and hard to see. Do you have a better photo that is of high quality? If you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, ask her to brighten the photo and add a white background for you.

I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

What you have is OK – i’d love for you to use something that would really make it POP! Here is another option you can use:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

About section:

Right now, you only have written “THE DYMOND GROUP IS OPEN FOR BUSINESS!
We are ready to service all your Real Estate needs. Let me know how we serve you.
Message Me !”

And based on the lessons in the program, this is a sales letter, so you want to provide more useful information on WHO you work with, WHAT you do, and HOW you help your clients.

VERY IMPORTANT TIP* please focus only on buyers or sellers. NOT both (for your sales letter). We find that profiles for realtors are more powerful when they have a honed focus. Of course, in your actual profile, you can mention you do both. But for your sales letter, it’s important to pick one that you enjoy the most. (I know you haven’t specified but it’s important that you do).

Please refer to this realtor profile’s format:

https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

Please go back through the lesson – you need a lot more content.

CALL TO ACTION – you need a better one:

If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂