3 years, 6 months ago-
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I like the message. Right to the point.
The profile page needs a vibrant background and I’d also recommend a head shot, looking straight at the camera and better lighting.
Also, I like the about me part quite a bit but could be expanded a lot with what “I” do and how this will help “me” WFIM….What’s in it for me.
Hope it helps,
Steve
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Hi @lori-chazonoff! Great work taking action on your profile! Below are my comments:
I’d have to agree with @steve-rath‘s kind feedback above.
Your current profile photo is really dark and hard to see. Do you have a better photo that is of high quality? If you email it to our graphic designer, Lindsey, ask her to brighten the photo and add a white background for you.
You also do need a custom banner image (which we can absolutely create for you). I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!
Headline:
What you have is on the right path!!
Want _________ WITHOUT _________☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients________☆☞ Message Me!
^ fill this out but try to use words that POP and make people want to work with you. Like, “YEAR ROUND” or “HIGH Recognition” or something around those lines.
About section:
I love the content you have written so far – you are so close but I would like there to be some better organization for your points to REALLY get them excited and engaged.
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with your flow and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Call to action (needs to be more direct and powerful):
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂
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Hey @lori-chazonoff, it was so great brainstorming with you yesterday!
Your profile photo looks GREAT!!
Personally, I really liked the lightbulb banner image and the umbrella. SUPER clean.
How about this for your headline:
Want to INCREASE Sales With 75% More Visibility WITHOUT Stress And Large Budgets? ☆ EXPERT Promotional Distributor Helping Clients in Montreal and Beyond ☆☞MSG Me!
LORI – if the limit is exceeded on the headline, use the one below:
Want to INCREASE Sales With 75% More Visibility WITHOUT Stress And Large Budgets? ☆ EXPERT Promotional Distributor Helping Clients GROW ☆☞MSG Me!
^ you can revise if needed 🙂
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Hi Neegen, I am giving you my LinkedIn – link and I am also writing some text below. I think I am getting there BUT still need your help..
https://www.linkedin.com/in/lorichazonoff/
WHAT I DO IN 14 WORDS OR LESS.
I help YOU Increase your Sales and stay top of mind with your clients and future clients.
Essentially…
I find the PERFECT BRANDED PRODUCTS for you to give to your clients which will remind them of you EVERY DAY.
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I eliminate your stress of spending time looking for products, coordinating the production, and worrying about delivery deadlines.
WHO DO I WORK WITH? Companies wanting to stay top of mind with their clients. Companies who provide branded clothing to their employees. Companies who want their contact information to be in front of their clients at all times.
How can you strengthen your relationship with existing customers, reach out to new customers, increase brand awareness, and make employees more productive? We are your solution.
Imagine your client or employee drinking their favorite latte out of your branded uniquely designed mug, wearing a cotton hoody in your corporate colors, leaning back on their sofa under your branded Sherpa blanket. So many of their scenes are embracing your brand. That is what I do. I help you reach and TOUCH your clients.
I work closely with you to understand your corporate culture, your needs and your target audience. This results in merchandise that is uniquely tailored to the recipients, within your budget and delivered on time.
Being in the Promotional business and building strong relationships with numerous factories for over 20 years has given me the resources and ability to help you with all of your printing and promotional needs.
I know you prefer to work with passionate, personable suppliers who care about you and will always back you up. I am that person and that is why my clients keep coming back, it is my knowledge, experience, relationships and uniqueness that stands out.
If you want to stand out and be noticed over and over again, let me show you how I can help.
When I work with you I become an extension of your marketing department.
My clients are always telling me that they are able to get a good night sleep knowing that I am taking care of them.
If you’re ready for me to help you then give me a call TODAY at 514-748-7693 or e mail me at lori@chazconsultants.com to see if we are a good fit!
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Hi @lori-chazonoff, this looks absolutely AMAZING!!!!! Wow. Grabbed my attention 10000% of the way.
Super proud of your hard work 🙂
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Hi, Thank you :-))
Which version do you like? ANY changes? Did you look at my LinkedIn or what I wrote here?
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Hi @lori-chazonoff, I like the one you wrote above as opposed to what was on your LinkedIn page and no changes needed!
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