Hi @carl-unruh! You posted correctly and welcome to the program – happy to provide you with feedback, below:

GREAT profile photo. 

I don’t like your banner (background) image very much – it could look a lot more professional. I’d like you to email our graphic designer, Lindsey, tell her about your field of business, and she will create something better for you.

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

I do like your headline BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP!

How about this:

Are You READY To Find Your Next Dream Home WITHOUT Extra Fees?☆EXPERT Realtor Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

About Section: 

When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are very important.

I recommend starting off by asking 3 short and sweet (BUT POWERFUL) pain point questions:

Then, lead them into who you are, what you do, WHO you work with, and why they should work with you.

Right now, it’s fully focused on you and a lot of testimonials. Based on the teachings of the lesson, you want to lead them through your sales letter and put the full focus on THEM and less on you and your experience (resume format).

Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with organizing your points.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/

Testimonials:

It’s great to have them but limit them to 1-3 testimonials and 1-3 sentences long.

Call to action (you need on at the very end):

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂