Hi there, @joy-denton! Welcome to the program – I’ll be providing you feedback 🙂

Your current profile photo is pretty but the quality is low. Also, I’d like you to have a photo of you facing the camera instead of showing a side profile. Do you have a better photo that is of high quality?

I don’t like your background photo very much. It’s not very inviting. I’d also like you to email Lindsey, our graphic designer, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline:

Your headline is on the right path but it does need to be cleaned up a bit and more specific with what you do.

Try to fill this out:

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!

Here is another example you can use:

Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!

About section:

What you have is good! There is a gap after your last testimonial.

REMOVE “I can help you”

and put this instead:

If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

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Awesome work!! Please let me know once you’ve made those changes 🙂

Joy,

You done good!!! I know, poor grammar.

I liked your profile quite a bit. Nice job.

Steve Rath