Hi @cathy-chapman, have I approved your script? If not, i’d like to take a look at it before you make another video.

This video is on the right path, but I do have a few comments:

What personalizes infomercials is having, preferably yourself, speaking in the videos. This allows your viewers to see who they would be working with and it also validifies your work. Would you be open to filming in front of the camera??

If not, please consider that the text is flying through the screen way too fast making it difficult to read your message.

Here are your next steps:

Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.

It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
high quality. Just look at the angle of the video and the lighting.

Also – if I haven’t reviewed your script, send it on over and i’ll see if it needs any tweaking 🙂

Hi @cathy-chapman! These are great videos – you have a very good video presence!! But, with the infomercial, instead of focusing on providing a quick tip, you’re actually giving a rundown of what you do and who you help so that people can reach out to you.

Please use this script, fill it out, send it to me for review, and then I’d love for you to film.

How about you start off asking up to 3 POWERFUL pain point questions…

Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?

Want __________?

(after you ask 3 questions)

If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

(2-5 sentences saying HOW exactly you plan to help / how you serve your clients)

(you can add 1-2 more sentences about why they should work with you or maybe a motivating 1 liner to get them excited)

If you want _______________ then message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit.