Hey @mark-clark, you did a nice job filming your infomercial! Few tiny tweaks:

I’d like for the camera to be at eye level when you are speaking because right now it’s like you’re looking down at your viewers.

So, if you are filming on your computer/laptop, put it on top of some stacked books or raise the camera in a way where it is at eye level.

Also, try your best to make eye contact with the camera lens so it doesn’t look like you’re looking somewhere else the whole time.

Other than that, you look great and so does your message!