Dashboard Forums High End Client Program LinkedIn – Profile Reviews & Questions Please review my linkedin profile

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      Minnie Rzeslawski
      Participant
        @Minnie24krealty@gmail.com

        Can you check my new profile and let me know your thoughts?

        https://www.linkedin.com/in/minnie24k

         

      • #44881

        n d
        Keymaster
          @negeen@coredm.com

          Hi @minnie-rzeslawski!

          Great profile photo! Your banner looks okay – if you send over to Lindsey, she can add an image of a home and make something better and custom for you – it’s better to give people visuals and something professionally made.

          Excellent headline. The stats will really make a difference – especially with it added in to the headline slot.

          About Section:

          Yuo have the content, but there’s far too much focus on you and not enough on them. I recommend replacing a lot of “I” with “you”.

          So talk about yourself in 1-3 sentences max, but if you want to get them hooked, you want to speak to them. For example:

          When YOU work with me, I make sure you are getting qualified buyers coming to your property!

          Here is an example to refer to:

          https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

          CALL TO ACTION – you need a better one:

          If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

          Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions! 🙂

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