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Hi @negeen-dargahi I’m one of the newest members at high-end client program.I’m going through the material and Im setting up my LinkedIn profile and I noticed that my LinkedIn profile does not have an option for me to add summary .Thank you in advance
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Hi @marina-frinea! Nice job taking action on your profile, and a great big welcome into the program!! Below are my comments:
I’d like you to have a better banner image – please email our graphic designer, Lindsey, and have her make a custom background pertaining to your field of business.
Beautiful profile photo! Please ZOOM in by 50% so we can see your face clearly. Also, have Lindsey add a white background for you if you’d like!
Headline:
Right now your headline says “Real Estate Professional at Premier Realty Group San Antonio, Texas” BUT based on the teachings in the program, your headline is the best piece of real estate. Let’s really make it POP! Think back on your Perfect Client exercise* How about filling out this template:
Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG Me!
or you could use:
Want Maximum PROFIT From Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients In [LOCATION]☆☞ Message Me!
About:
Right now, you have 4 “call me” in the middle of your sales letter and those not only do not belong there, but it takes away from your sales letter. Only have 1 call to action and that belongs at the very end of your message.
When someone clicks to view your profile, the first 2 sentences of your profile About/summary section are available for them until they have to click “see more”. That means, your first 2 sentences are significant.
Also, you need a bit more content in your sales letter and it just needs to be better organized!
Pro tip: go to Kent’s profile, copy his About section, and ADD your own information to it. His outline is what we teach in the program! This should really help you with removing those bullet points at the end and focusing on a powerful sales letter.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
HERE is an example of what a good realtor profile should look like:
https://www.linkedin.com/in/tarapedraz/
You want to detail, WHO you work with, HOW you help your clients, and WHY they should work with you.
Call to action:
If you’re ready for _______ then give me a call TODAY at _______ or message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!
Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!
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