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My goal for business owners is straightforward…help serious business owners generate more clients, close more sales and increase their overall revenue and profits…quickly.
Over the years, I’ve developed a keen understanding of the complex issues facing small business owners in the type of volatile economy existing today.
My experience has helped me develop the skills to quickly and effectively teach business owners how to successfully apply the right strategies in the right order that allows them to grow their business to its full potential.
I specialize in helping business owners in key performance areas which creates financial freedom for the business owner.
Business processes
Systems run the business-Team Members run the systems
Time management
Improving the productivity and efficiency of the business and the team
Team hiring and training
Every business must start with the team in mind
Every team member must be in the right seat on the bus
Every team member must know what the job is, how to do the job and why we do it that way
Every team member will understand the what, how and why of “World Class Customer Service”
Sales and Marketing
Applying the right strategies in the right order to achieve maximum revenue
Create a MARKETING DOMINATING POSITION
Financials
Every business owner must understand the financial numbers
WORK LESS, MAKE MORE!!
My Business Growth model is perfectly positioned to help business owners realize their dream of creating their own multimillion-dollar business that feeds their passion to achieve personal, financial,and professional freedom.
Are you ready to get incredible results for your business and your team?
Shoot me a message on LinkedIn, email me or book a coaching session on my website TODAY.
ron@3winbusinesscoaching.com or http://www.3winbusinesscoaching.com
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Hey @ron-brockwell! It would be better to see your entire LinkedIn profile so I can provide full feedback – please send that once you’re able to.
For now – I like what you have but the focus is pinch too much on you and not enough on them (with your verbiage).
Because it’s a sales letter, you want to address their pain points, talk about HOW you can help them, WHY they should work with you, and WHO you work with.
For example:
Instead of saying “My goal for business owners is straightforward…help serious business owners generate more clients, close more sales and increase their overall revenue and profits…quickly.”
You could say:
When YOU work with me, I will you will be in the loop 100% of the way. You will not only generate SERIOUS and qualified clients, you’ll be able to close more sales, and increase your overall revenue (QUICKLY)!!
What more?
My team and I ____________..
^ something like that – so it’s leading you through the sales letter.
Kent does an awesome job of this. If you want to use his About section as a guide, that would be okay because we teach it in the program.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Everything else looks good! Good call to action!
Just tiny tweaks on verbiage are needed.
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