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Hi @beverly-johnson! My apologies – I dont see a post seeking feedback. It may have gotten lost in the forum.
Would you please provide me your URL and I will get back to you as soon as possible.
Thank you!
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Hi @beverly-johnson! Below are my comments on your LINKEDIN profile. ALSO – are you still having trouble ^^ ??
COMMENTS:
Banner Image (the flag): i’d like this to change and pertain to your business. Please email our graphic designer, Lindsey, tell her about your field of business and she will create something custom for you.
Profile Photo: beautiful photo, but I don’t like that your hand is in the photo touching your face. Do you have a photo with just your face smiling without your hand?? If so, add that. Also, you can send it to Lindsey to add a white background for you.
Headline: Great headline!! I REVAMPED it for you 🙂
Want To EARN Up To $7500 In Rewards Upon Closing Your VA Home?☆ Luxury Meets Military Loan Options ☆☞MSG Me!
^ you may need to tweak if I got the verbiage wrong – you have a 120 character limit FYI!!
About Section:
So, remember that this is a sales letter and right now you only have a paragraph.
I want you to look at Kent’s profile About section and USE his outline and fill it out with you OWN content.
You really need a lot more content talking about HOW you help clients, WHO you work with, WHY they should work with you, and WHO you are.
https://www.linkedin.com/in/klittlejohn/
Once you make these changes, let me know and I’ll take a look 🙂
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