Hi @jane-rainwater! Welcome to the program – so great to have you. Below are my comments:

You need a better profile photo. What you have right now is very blurry and I’m also unable to see your face. Please find a higher quality photo or have someone take a photo of you smiling at the camera.

The blue rectangle behind your profile photo is a banner image and you need one! I’d also like you to email Lindsey, and tell her a little about your field of business and she can create something better!

Lindsey@coredm.com

Headline (words under name):

Your headline currently says “Real Estate Professionals” and you need more than that for it to stand out. Please use the outline below 🙂

Want _______ WITHOUT _______? ☆EXPERT _____ Helping Clients _____☆☞MSG

About section:

I’d like you to go back through the lesson and read over what the summary section will need to consist of. This is a section that is the meat and potatoes – your sales letter. It is not a resume format.

Also, there needs to be better information and better organization to lead them effortlessly through your sales letter.

Please refer to these profiles from other realtors in the program. Copy the FORMAT/outline and pay attention to the way they lead you through their profile.

Look how she details HOW they help their clients, WHO they work with, etc.

https://www.linkedin.com/in/elois-fuller-9b033723/

Please go back through the lesson – you need a lot more content!!

You need to tell them:

what you do, how you help them, who you work with, why they should work with you.

CALL TO ACTION – you need a better one:

If you’re READY for _______ message me here on LinkedIn to see if we’re a good fit!

Please tag me after you make the necessary revisions!

🙂