Hey @sandi-reed – this is an awesome start!! There are a few organizational and wording changes that i’d like you to make. Super easy fixes!

I like your questions but I REALLY want you to choose 3 of your BEST pain point questions, and only 3.

Are you WANTING _________?
Do you NEED __________?

Want __________?

(after you ask 3 questions)

If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

Hi, I’m _______ and I am a ____________ helping clients with _________.

(and then you want to tell them EXACTLY what you can do for them – such as:)

Stop wasting valuable time and allow ME to take over the busy work. When you work with me…I’ll walk you through EACH and EVERY step of preparing important contracts, researching market analysis, handling property management, and MUCH MUCH more!

If you’re ready for ________ then give me a call at ____ or shoot me a message TODAY to see if we’d be a good fit!

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I hope this helps!

Are you facing a forced sale of your home to satisfy creditors or debtors?

My name is Gladys Ntaryike at eXp Realty. We provide safe options and solutions to help you regain your sanity and safe your home.

If this resonates with you, click the link below

https://www.linkedin.com/in/gladys-ntaryike-realtor%C2%AE/

or text me at 214-228-6987 so we can work together.

Hey @gladys-ntaryike, i’d like you to fill in the template that I provided above, please. What you have is far too short and doesn’t detail what you do nearly enough.

If you have questions on that, please let me know!

Hi @Negeen,

Thank you so much for the feedback. I really appreciate your time.

Are you WANTING Maximum PROFIT from Selling Your Home WITHOUT Stress?

Do you NEED to close quickly so you can get over your frustration and pain?

Do you Want to regain COMPLETE control of your freedom?

If you answered ‘YES’ to those questions, you came to the right place!

Hi, I’m Gladys Ntaryike and I am an EXPERT Realtor® helping clients facing a forced sale of their homes to satisfy creditors or debtors.

Stop wasting valuable time and allow ME to take over the busy work. When you work with me…I’ll walk you through EACH and EVERY step of preparing important contracts, researching market analysis, handling property management, and MUCH MUCH more!

If you’re ready to regain your life back, then give me a call at214-228-6987 or shoot me a message TODAY to see if we’d be a good fit!

SUPER JOB, @gladys-ntaryike!! Woohoo – you are ready to film!

Here are your next steps:

Halle made a very helpful video on how to record your infomercial.

It is called “VIDEO TIPS” in the Transformational Business Strategy Module.

Here is also an example of what it should sound like. Of course, this is a high-quality version but yours does NOT have to be this
high quality. Just look at the angle of the video and the lighting.

@negeen-dargahi

Thank you is an UNDERSTATEMENT.

I am forever grateful for everything.

I must and WILL WIN!!!

@matt-barcus

Hi Matt,

Finally did it and know it is not the best…. following in the path of Massive Imperfect Action… lol

Can’t seem to get the video to play upright. Help please!

Hey @gladys-ntaryike!

You look great – could you make sure to turn the video horizontally?

Lastly, I’d like you to re-film and add more engagement.

Right now, it’s coming off like you’re reading a script and not interested — so make sure that you’re very comfortable with the script so when you’re reading it, it comes off VERY engaging.

Other than that, great job 🙂

@negeen-dargahi

Hi Negeen,

Thank you for the honest feedback.

I will redo the infomercial video again.

Also,

I cannot find the cycle of success videos. Can you help me with that please?

Have a fabulous day!

Hey @gladys-ntaryike – absolutely! Your message is THERE, just one more refilm and I think it should be good 🙂

Absolutely – here is the Cycle of Success content:

GO TO http://app.hecp.com/hecp/mindset-coaching-calls/ and choose the Master Class: Cycle of Success!! All recordings are indexed on the right side of the screen.